(Draft 1. It feels kind of flat to me. If anyone can figure out why, feel free to leave a comment.)
Grayfeather poked his beak out from under the eaves, testing the weather. A gust of icy wind blasted his face, ruffling his feathers, and he shivered. Instinct warned him to stay hidden up here, out of the deadly cold, but his clenched stomach commanded him to leave and seek food.
On mornings like this sparrows huddled in their nests, up in the eaves of the yellow brick building, until hunger forced them out. This winter was a miserable, brutal one, and scavenging was pointless. The snow was piled four sparrows high and showed no signs of thawing. Even the most determined of them could not scratch their way through. The best they could do was hope for crumbs.
Grayfeather spread his wings and flew out from under the eaves, gliding across the frozen courtyard and landing on a window ledge.
He peeked in through the tinted window. Just beyond was a stall where two ape-beasts sold a foul-tasting brown liquid and an assortment of pastries. The bagels and muffins sat there in their neat rows, just behind the glass, taunting the starving sparrow.
Grayfeather’s gaze shifted to his reflection in the window, a brown-tinged distortion of himself. He could see the despair in his eyes, and he turned away. Self-pity wouldn’t put food in his beak.
He hopped off the ledge and fluttered over to the sidewalk, near where the window swung open and the ape-beasts exited the building. Most of the flock – those not on guard duty – were already assembled here, hoping one of the departing customers would be careless with its purchase. Careless, or generous.
Like that one, over there. Grayfeather watched as the ape-beast tore off a tiny piece of its bagel. He craned his head upward – was it meant for him? No, the ape-beast was looking in a different direction.
Grayfeather was not the only one watching. Raider and Two Spots looked up at the crumb, then at each other.
Both sparrows lowered their heads, glaring at each other, ready to race.
The crumb flew. Both sparrows rushed forward, talons tearing at the cold concrete. Two Spots had the lead- no, Raider was pulling ahead-
The two sparrows collided. There was a flurry of feathers, a frenzy of cheeping, and one final, frustrated shriek.
Raider sailed off into a nearby hedge to enjoy her prize.
Grayfeather watched, despondent. The flock shouldn’t have to live like this, fighting for scraps, when there was a feast just on the other side of the window. Some, like him, were too old to fight. Others… Grayfeather looked over at Red, half-blind from an eye infection, and Blackbeak, with a broken leg that would never heal. They could not compete for food. They would starve to death if the weather didn’t improve.
Unless…
One of the ape-beasts dragged out a cardboard box, propping open the door. They must be preparing to move something large. The way was open – but only for a little while.
He would need help. Surely the ape-beasts would fight to defend to defend their treasure, and he could not carry an entire bagel by himself. He would need a sparrow with the courage to face the towering, hulking ape-beasts in their lair, the speed and agility to dodge their deadly blows, and the strength to haul one of the enormous bagels out of its case and out the door.
In other words, he needed Raider.
The thought frightened him almost as much as the prospect of starving. The key to peaceful living in this flock was to never approach Raider – she would attack anyone foolish enough to try. Sparrows, starlings, squirrels, even a nosy dog – the species didn’t matter. She’d fought them all - and won. Impossible to get along with, but she was the bird you wanted on guard duty. Many a marauding starling had learned to fear her wrath.
She was finishing her bagel crumb when Grayfeather found her. He chirped a greeting as he approached.
Her head shot up. Two fierce brown eyes locked onto on Grayfeather’s. Raider lowered her head, preparing to charge.
Grayfeather shrank back and squawked an apology. Raider ruffled her feathers and stood up straight, somewhat mollified. Her eye-stripes remained fixed in a scowl as she demanded to know why he’d come.
Chirping softly, he explained: There’s no food.
She lowered her head again and replied with an angry cheep: This crumb is MINE.
She must have misunderstood. Grayfeather squawked another apology and continued: There can be food for all of us.* We don't have to fight each other. *
Raider turned back to her meal. Grayfeather realized this was the wrong approach. Raider liked fighting for her meals. He looked back at the door. The ape-beasts were moving a cart inside. They would close the door when they were done. There wasn’t much time.
You’ve never fought an ape-beast before.
She ruffled her feathers. No, I haven’t.
Grayfeather gestured toward the open door. Now’s your chance. You can make them fear you, just as the starlings fear you. * The cart was through the door. But we have to move now.*
If sparrows could smile, Raider would have. Grayfeather could see it in her eyes. Already she was dreaming of the mayhem she would unleash, the ape-beasts screaming and diving out of her way.
All right, Grayfeather. War it is.
She gulped down the remains of her bagel crumb and took flight. Grayfeather rushed to follow her, his old wings straining to keep pace. He called to the sparrows still on the ground, telling them there was food, much food, where he was headed. There was a rush of wings as several others rose to join them.
A gust of warm, stale air rose beneath their wings as they approached the door. Grayfeather let out a jubilant chirp, thinking of the feast to come. The others joined in. Cheeping and chirping, the raiding party swooped through the open door in a blur of gray and brown.
Three of the ape-beasts were standing in line. Another five lounged in nearby chairs. Most of them were distracted, staring at those funny glowing rectangles that they liked to carry. Not a single one of them appeared prepared to defend their roost – in fact, they appeared to be ducking and hurrying away…
The flock banked right, aiming for the coffee shop. Grayfeather swooped down, scolding the bagel-keeper. Had they really been afraid of these useless, hideous creatures all their lives? Had they really scattered before their feet like so many dry leaves? For the first time, he saw the ape-beasts as the really were: slow, clumsy, earthbound vermin. It was they who had build this city, hacking down the trees and trampling the grasses, leaving nothing but empty fields of asphalt and concrete where no food could grow.
He landed on the bagel-keeper's hand and pecked its knuckles. It yelped and swung its hand, mashing Grayfeather's left wing against the cash register. He fell onto the counter and hopped away, dazed. His wing hurt - he was going to regret this tomorrow - but it was not broken.
The ape-beast shrieked, and Grayfeather looked up. Raider was perched upon the ape-beast’s head, pecking at its scalp. The ape-beast clutched at its hair, but Raider was too quick. Squawking and scolding, she herded the panicked ape-beast out from behind the counter and down the hallway. Grayfeather heard one last angry cheep: MOVE!
Two of the other sparrows had already landed inside the pastry display. They were taking turns tearing chunks out of a multigrain bagel when Grayfeather hopped up. Wasting no time, he pecked out a beakful for himself.
The rest of the raiding party landed and joined in, stuffing their beaks with the soft bread.
The last to land was Raider. Grayfeather considered asking her if she’d enjoyed herself, but then thought better of it.
Once the bagel looked small enough, three of the raiders grabbed hold of what remained and took flight, winging their way across the now-deserted lobby. Grayfeather gave the coffee shop one last glance. They might not be able to raid it again. Even the ape-beasts might be smart enough to post some guards next time.
But that was tomorrow's problem. For today, the sparrows were fed.
They flew out into the cold January air, half-eaten bagel suspended between them, towards the rest of the hungry flock.