I have a scene that I have been working on and I tend to bounce around on voice. I can't decide which direction to go...I like both for various reasons.
Would posting the scene and having people take a look be on-topic?
I have a scene that I have been working on and I tend to bounce around on voice. I can't decide which direction to go...I like both for various reasons.
Would posting the scene and having people take a look be on-topic?
Critique questions are on topic here, but as per our critique guidelines you'd need to ask specific questions to avoid it being closed.
In this case, perhaps asking if character voice has achieved such-and-such a tone would work, or anything else along those lines.